[DOCS] Canvas refresh for 7.10 (#80017)

docs/canvas/canvas-share-workpad.asciidoc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ When you've finished your workpad, you can share it outside of {kib}.
 
 Create a JSON file of your workpad that you can export outside of {kib}.
 
-Click *Share > Download as JSON*.
+To begin, click *Share > Download as JSON*.
 
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 image::images/canvas-export-workpad.png[Export single workpad through JSON, from Share dropdown]
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Want to export multiple workpads? Go to the *Canvas* home page, select the workp
 
 If you have a subscription that supports the {report-features}, you can create a PDF copy of your workpad that you can save and share outside {kib}.
 
-Click *Share > PDF reports > Generate PDF*.
+To begin, click *Share > PDF reports > Generate PDF*.
 
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 image::images/canvas-generate-pdf.gif[Image showing how to generate a PDF]
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ For more information, refer to <<reporting-getting-started, Reporting from Kiban
 
 If you have a subscription that supports the {report-features}, you can create a POST URL that you can use to automatically generate PDF reports using <<watcher-ui,Watcher>> or a script.
 
-Click *Share > PDF reports > Copy POST URL*.
+To begin, click *Share > PDF reports > Copy POST URL*.
 
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 image::images/canvas-create-URL.gif[Image showing how to create POST URL]

docs/canvas/canvas-tutorial.asciidoc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 [[canvas-tutorial]]
 == Tutorial: Create a workpad for monitoring sales
 
-To get up and running with Canvas, use the following tutorial where you'll create a workpad for monitoring sales at an eCommerce store.
+To get up and running with Canvas, add the Sample eCommerce orders data, then use the data to create a workpad for monitoring sales at an eCommerce store.
 
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 === Before you begin
@@ -114,18 +114,16 @@ image::images/canvas-timefilter-element.png[Image showing Canvas workpad with fi
 
 To see how the data changes, set the time filter to *Last 7 days*. As you change the time filter options, the elements automatically update.
 
-Your workpad is now complete!
+Your workpad is complete!
 
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-=== Next steps
+=== What's next?
 Now that you know the Canvas basics, you're ready to explore on your own.
 
 Here are some things to try:
 
 * Play with the {kibana-ref}/add-sample-data.html[sample Canvas workpads].
 
-* Build presentations of your own live data with <<create-workpads,workpads>>.
+* Build presentations of your own data with <<create-workpads,workpads>>.
-
-* Learn more about <<add-canvas-elements,elements>> &mdash; the building blocks of your workpad.
 
 * Deep dive into the {kibana-ref}/canvas-function-reference.html[expression language and functions] that drive Canvas.

docs/user/canvas.asciidoc

@@ -17,6 +17,8 @@ With Canvas, you can:
 
 * Focus the data you want to display with filters.
 
+To begin, open the menu, then go to *Canvas*.
+
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 image::images/canvas-gs-example.png[Getting started example]
 
@@ -26,7 +28,8 @@ For a quick overview of Canvas, watch link:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqvF_
 [[create-workpads]]
 == Create workpads
 
-A _workpad_ provides you with a space where you can build presentations of your live data.
+A _workpad_ provides you with a space where you can build presentations of your live data. With Canvas, 
+you can create a workpad from scratch, start with a preconfigured workpad, import an existing workpad, or use a sample data workpad.
 
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 [[start-with-a-blank-workpad]]
@@ -34,19 +37,15 @@ A _workpad_ provides you with a space where you can build presentations of your
 
 To use the background colors, images, and data of your choice, start with a blank workpad.
 
-. Open the menu, then go to *Canvas*.
+. On the *Canvas workpads* page, click *Create workpad*.
 
-. On the *Canvas workpads* view, click *Create workpad*.
+. Specify the *Workpad settings*.
 
-. Add a *Name* to your workpad.
+.. Add a *Name* to your workpad.
 
-. In the *Width* and *Height* fields, specify the size.
+.. In the *Width* and *Height* fields, specify the size, or select one of default layouts. 
 
-. Select the layout.
+.. Click the *Background* color picker, then select the color for your workpad.
-+
-For example, click *720p* for a traditional presentation layout.
-
-. Click the *Background color* picker, then select the background color for your workpad.
 +
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 image::images/canvas-background-color-picker.png[Canvas color picker]
@@ -57,9 +56,7 @@ image::images/canvas-background-color-picker.png[Canvas color picker]
 
 If you're unsure about where to start, you can use one of the preconfigured templates that come with Canvas.
 
-. Open the menu, then go to *Canvas*.
+. On the *Canvas workpads* page, select *Templates*.
-
-. On the *Canvas workpads* view, select *Templates*.
 
 . Click the preconfigured template that you want to use.
 
@@ -69,17 +66,15 @@ If you're unsure about where to start, you can use one of the preconfigured temp
 [[import-existing-workpads]]
 === Import existing workpads
 
-When you want to use a workpad that someone else has already started, import the JSON file into Canvas.
+When you want to use a workpad that someone else has already started, import the JSON file.
 
-. Open the menu, then go to *Canvas*.
+To begin, drag the file to the *Import workpad JSON file* field on the *Canvas workpads* page. 
-
-. On the *Canvas workpads* view, click and drag the file to the *Import workpad JSON file* field.
 
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 [[use-sample-data-workpads]]
 === Use sample data workpads
 
-Each of the sample data sets comes with a Canvas workpad that you can use for your own workpad inspiration.
+Each of the {kib} sample data sets comes with a workpad that you can use for your own workpad inspiration.
 
 . Add a {kibana-ref}/add-sample-data.html[sample data set].
 
@@ -123,12 +118,12 @@ To save a group of elements, press and hold Shift, select the elements you want
 Elements are saved in *Add element > My elements*.
 
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-[[add-existing-visuualizations]]
+[[add-saved-objects]]
-=== Add existing visualizations
+=== Add saved objects
 
 Add <<managing-saved-objects,saved objects>> to your workpad, such as maps and visualizations.
 
-. Click *Add element > Add from Visualize Library*.
+. Click *Add element > Add from {kib}*.
 
 . Select the saved object you want to add.
 +

docs/user/dashboard/vega-reference.asciidoc

@@ -64,16 +64,17 @@ Override it by providing a different `stroke`, `fill`, or `color` (Vega-Lite) va
 [[vega-queries]]
 ==== Writing {es} queries in Vega
 
-experimental[] {kib} extends the Vega https://vega.github.io/vega/docs/data/[data] elements
+{kib} extends the Vega https://vega.github.io/vega/docs/data/[data] elements
-with support for direct {es} queries specified as a `url`.
+with support for direct {es} queries specified as `url`.
 
-Because of this, {kib} is **unable to support dynamically loaded data**,
+{kib} is **unable to support dynamically loaded data**,
 which would otherwise work in Vega. All data is fetched before it's passed to
 the Vega renderer.
 
-To define an {es} query in Vega, set the `url` to an object. {kib} will parse
+To define an {es} query in Vega, set the `url` to an object. {kib} parses
 the object looking for special tokens that allow your query to integrate with {kib}.
-These tokens are:
+
+Tokens include the following:
 
 * `%context%: true`: Set at the top level, and replaces the `query` section with filters from dashboard
 * `%timefield%: <name>`: Set at the top level, integrates the query with the dashboard time filter
@@ -87,8 +88,7 @@ These tokens are:
 * `"%dashboard_context-filter_clause%"`: String replaced by an object containing filters
 * `"%dashboard_context-must_not_clause%"`: String replaced by an object containing filters
 
-Putting this together, an example query that counts the number of documents in 
+For example, the following query counts the number of documents in a specific index:
-a specific index:
 
 [source,yaml]
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